Showing posts with label Wordle. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Wordle. Show all posts

Tuesday, 29 June 2010

One More Wordle

I'm officially a Wordle addict.

I've been working on a short story called The Tiffin Box (adult literary fiction) for months and months. It's been in hibernation and I brought it out tonight to read it over again.

Then I decided to Wordle it. And I love the result, so I had to share.

Wordle: The Tiffin Box


(Click on the picture if you'd like to see a bigger version.)

Any comments? I know the last time I Wordled a lot of people said they wanted to try it. Did you? How'd you like it?

Sunday, 20 June 2010

Back Wordled

I was up kind of early this morning. (Thanks Sophie.)

So I decided to do something I've wanted to do for awhile. I put my entire WiP in Wordle.

Wordle: BACK

I know it's pretty small. If you click on it, it should take you to the big version on the Wordle website.

I'm glad I did this because it shows me a few things about my book. By pulling out the most commonly used words, it shows what you've really been writing about, regardless of what you *think* you've been writing about.

(1)

My MC's sister's name, Courtney, is mentioned more often than her love interest's, Isaac. I didn't set out to write a romance novel, so this doesn't necessarily bother me. What it does show me is that I have to think about how I'm pitching this book, because it's probably a story just as much about a relationship between sisters as it is a love story.

Any thoughts on this? Does that strike you as being too crowded a plot line? (Be honest.) Do I need to tone down one or the other and focus on one, or do you think having two layers of equal prominence in a plot is okay?

(2)

I also noticed that the words "Like" and  "Just" are huge (which is not a good sign).
Yes, my old friends "Like" and "Just."
Even "Really" is too big for comfort.
I'll be using the Find tool in Word to locate all my "Likes," "Justs" and "Reallys."
So, potential Beta Readers, don't freak out. I will take care of this problem before any of you are forced to read this crazy thing.

Any other thoughts on my Wordle?
Have you tried putting your entire manuscript in Wordle?
It's quick, it's fun, it's enlightening.
What are you waiting for?