I'm in the last quarter of my second draft of the WiP. It's going well most of the time, but I'm realizing something.
I care WAY too much about what my characters are looking at.
Every few sentences, I'm finding this:
She raised her gaze to his face.....
He glanced over at her.....
She looked up.....
He stared down at his fingers....
She watched the sky melt to indigo....
Okay, these are not ACTUAL quotes from my WiP, but you get the point. I have an obsession with WHAT PEOPLE ARE LOOKING AT and it's driving me crazy!
Rant over. Back to editing.
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